Rapids, She *NPAC Nominee April '03*
She came tripping through the fabricof a one night stand and fallRise and acclimateShe was a star pupilin an all boisterous hallShe was the darling of theagesflipping through her back pagesAnd she...
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This is a fine example of the quality that just blows me away in this forum. Nothing I say to this could do it justice, so I'll just sit here applauding...Brilliant! Bravo!!Taliesin
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much enjoyed, just as much as the first time~hugs~LuVMeMoonchild/AKA-Wrathchild"...he came out of nowhere, always a friend of the victim at the slaughter of the innocents."
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wow, erik ... I love the creativity of this ... and the emotion ... superb ...When it came to wordswe were psalms over sonnetsFor I could never hold outten syllables longlove that!I embrace my desire...
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Wow!the creativity of your language use in this is superb Much enjoyed!"Write the bad things that are done to you in sand, but write the good things that happen to you on a piece of marble." -Arabic...
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This is the best thing I've read in a long time. Loved it.
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Every time I read one of your poems I can literally hear a voice with it, and it's a different and unique one each time! It's amazing! And yes, i'm able to shut out the usual voices i hear just fine...
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Taliesin I thank you for your applauseand for taking the time to readand I am more than flattered that you enjoyedERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em sinkI...
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Ah Brother DreamerI am flattered that you read thisone againERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em sinkI write your nameOn a great wood beamOn an ancient ship in a...
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JMLthanks for the nominationand the great words of praiseYou are spoiling the hell out of meERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em sinkI write your nameOn a great...
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ValoeSo glad that you likedthis was so fun to writewhich is reward enoughbut your words are great too!ERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em sinkI write your...
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JohnI appreciate your timethank youERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em sinkI write your nameOn a great wood beamOn an ancient ship in a fading dreamI write your...
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PaulwowI dont know what else to sayBut thank youERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em sinkI write your nameOn a great wood beamOn an ancient ship in a fading...
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MikeI think that your words here are more thanbeyond kindI strive for having my own written voiceso I thank you for thatERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em...
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erik ... while I'd love to accept the thanks for your poem being nominated ... 'twas not I who'd done so ... NPAC Forum I embrace my desire to feel the rhythm, to feel connected enough to step aside...
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ERiK...another classic piece from your pen...with passion and humour, this brought a smile...too many good descriptives, too many great metaphors to mention...bravo! Exit light...Enter night...Take my...
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My appologiesBard thank you for the nominationit is greatly appreciatedERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em sinkI write your nameOn a great wood beamOn an...
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Soulseasemy thanks to you for your wordsvery happy indeed that you likedERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em sinkI write your nameOn a great wood beamOn an...
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